Monday, July 20, 2015

Reverse Outline

Reverse Outline

1
introduces and shows the comparison
Bees are very effective in creating a social system and we should learn from them.
Utopia, change

2
connects to the reader and creates a mentality for change
How you ever wanted to make a difference; well just believe in your idea.
creating change, believe, raising awareness.
3
introduces the secret life of bees
Bees are actually the way to go in terms of a democratic model.
systematic, singular goal, unity
4
connects the bees with the mentality in 2nd sentence
Both the bees and the idea for creating change follow the same path.
little steps, difference
5
bring in my own ideas
I created a change in my robotics class.
stood up, change was needed
6
relate my experience to OWS movement
The OWS movement was never clear to me but Taibbi talks about how the movement is more than just Wall Street.
beauty, movement, questioned, important
7
connect both essays to each other
The way the bee scouts look for positive change is what makes them similar to the protestors.
looking for answers, problems, set goal

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